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Distance: A Dark Mafia Romance (Beneath The Mask Series)

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Maddie was very much into the fairytale love and has been searching for years for the right man for heršŸ¤“only to FINALLY realise she doesnā€™t actually want a prince she wants the monsteršŸ˜ˆ maddie had a bad relationship with her mum who would just try and push her into doing everything her mums way and would always criticise her looks or just the way she isšŸ™„ but Grayson never let us down, he knows how women should be treatedšŸ‘ø he was willing to sacrifice everything just for her to be happyšŸ„¹šŸ„° Distance is book 1 in the Beneath The Mask Series, a series of standalone dark mafia romances. Distance is a mafia cross sports romance, full of spice and suspense. Can we overcome our inner demons with only love? Sienna Iā€™m newly single and determined to make New York City my permanent home, so I have no interest in dating for the foreseeable future. This plot had so much potential. Sports AND mafia. I mean cmon, bread and butter. It could have been so good.

Third, there were so many instances where I either thought something was going to add to the plot, or there were random things thrown in that literally did nothing to the plot and I'm like, why is this happening??? Like the Gregory situation, I thought it was gonna be so much more. Like maybe he'd become a stalker, or wouldn't take no for an answer and seek some revenge. Nope. Literally nothing. Then the ex wife? What the hell was even the point of that? It added nothing to the plot and then our FMC acts completely out of character. Just so many wtf moments. You can find every cliche out there just to make story crawl forward. She saw pictures of him with another woman and runs away. He grovels. She some thing again and runs away and he begs again. Same thing again and again... I understand that sheā€™s a UK author, but if the book is set in America the characters should sound American, not English (Sienna is the obvious exception). THE GRAMMAR. I COULDNā€™T GET PAST IT. I almost DNFā€™d because the grammar was so bad. It went beyond missing commas and misspellings. Iā€™m talking about straight up using words that didnā€™t make sense in the context they were being used. There were moments I found myself thinking, ā€œwas this book originally written in a different language?ā€This book was the perfect combination of spice and plot. I donā€™t want to give too much away as everyone who decides to read this should try to go in blind. Male MC: Grayson Ward is an ex-Marine turned Mafia hitman. He went through a heartbreaking betrayal in the past and has since avoided any romantic relationships. That is until he meets his beautiful sunshine, Maddie. Grayson is 35 and has sandy colored hair and icy-blue eyes. Keller was everything, he was massive and tattooed. Our mafia enforcer who is also a really famous boxer. They instantly have chemistry, and the spice starts off pretty early so this is by no means a slow burn romance. He already feels protective of her and does everything he can to keep her safe, not only from her ex but from the mafia ties he is connected to. Maddie was a successful makeup artist. Not only was her mom not supportive of her career, she was also pressured to get married before her childbearing days were over. She went on many dates in search of a husband, yet no one gave her butterflies like Grayson did. Luna Mason is a talented author with a passion for writing romance novels. She is known for her ability to create compelling characters and intriguing storylines that keep readers engaged from start to finish. Her writing style is smooth, and she uses vivid descriptions to bring her characters to life. Distance by Luna Mason Review

This book started off with a bang and I was hooked from chapter 1šŸŖ Grayson was in the army a few years before and one day he finds his Brest friend dead and that his wife has been cheating in himšŸ˜¬ I was thinking woow all this already okay Iā€™m so ready for the restšŸ˜‚ he moves to new York and meets a stranger in a bar and next minute heā€™s become a hitman for the mafiaā˜ ļø I didnā€™t want to put it down it kept me wanting morešŸ«£ Keller: A former underground street fighter turned heavyweight boxing champion, Keller is a complex character with a dark past. He is a monster who hunts in the shadows and is trapped in the mafia until his debts are paid. While I was reading Distance, I could not help but desperately wish that Maddie and Grayson's story would come out the very next day. These two had me in a chokehold the entire time, they were the definition of angst whenever they interacted, and their book was everything it should have been. When the truth is unmasked, could she still love me? Would love be enough to battle our demons and come out on top? There were a lot of issues with the book that pulled me out of the story. It needed more time in a editorā€™s hands. There were a lot of typos/missed words/issues with tense. She used the phrase ā€œblood curlingā€ to describe a scream. The phrase is ā€œblood curdlingā€. Things like that drive me up a wall.Keller From a poor, underground street fighter, I rose to fame as the world heavyweight boxing champion. Distance is a modern masterpiece, a powerful novel that can be read on its own. This novel is written by Luna Mason. She is a true storyteller, and Distance is her best book. It is an epic tale of family, secrets, loss, marriage, betrayal, friendships, laughter, and regrets. Distance is a heartfelt novel written with compassion and hope, reconciling the past to pave a road to happiness and second chances. The characters in this novel bring life and heart to this story, each with a distinct voice and personality. They made readers love them, they made readers sad, they made readers angry, they made readers laugh, they made readers cry, and they made readers believe in the promise of love and home. However, their past traumas and fears threaten to tear them apart. Will they be able to overcome their demons and find a way to be together, or will their fears keep them apart forever? Characters Authors, if you are a member of the Goodreads Author Program, you can edit information about your own books. Find out how in this guide.

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