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The Inheritance Games by Jennifer Lynn Barnes is a high stakes YA mystery series that we absolutely loved! It holds a special place in our hearts as our very first Mortal Edition Set and we are so happy to share this matching edition of the fourth book in the series, The Brothers Hawthorne! Dear Authors, you cannot just end a book like that. You're literally killing us. And when we die, we cant read the 2nd book, and when we cant read the book, that hurts you so in the end we both suffer, right? So why not take pity on our poor mortal souls and not end it like that?? Thank you. The other thing that really got on my nerves is the dialogue. It's somehow both bland and pretentious. It's basic as can be, but presented as if it's some sort of witty repartee worth savoring. Then to further rub salt in the wound, random dull sentences are treated like epiphanies, italicized and repeated over and over, just so the reader wouldn't miss it when they come across it for the tenth time.
Libby just was there. If she has a bigger purpose, then I want to know it. Just don't make her invisible or make her appear in key moments and then forget about her... Like the author did. (That's how I felt it). I want to know more of my goth girl. Max was okay, and she was totally right when she told Avery that she never asked her how she, Max, was feeling, if she was okay, etc. But that was it. We didn't see or knew anything else from Max anymore. Like, she gave her speech and then left the chat for good. The false swearing was getting into my nerves, please.More random nonsense: " If I do what I should no more often than I say what I shouldn’t - then what does that make me?”
the only side characters i’m totally obsessed with are libby and nash🤭i don’t like thea. idk about rebecca yet, i think she’s fine, but we’ll see. idk why but xander kind of annoyed me? he reminds me of a little snake in the grass. is that just me!? or maybe i just loved the other three brothers way more and didn’t really care for xander IDK lol maybe my opinion will change when i read the second book hehe. max…every time she spoke i just wanted her to stfu. her replacing swear words with words that sound like them was so cringe. she’s what…17!? i don’t have a problem with not wanting to say swear words, but just talk normally then😩I didn't feel any connection between Avery and Jameson, nor Avery and Grayson. I don't ship them because I don't think that they have chemistry or a spark. One moment, he's threatening Avery and the next one he's pinning for her. How did this happen? I was so confused by this. And I still am. The same guys who were "in love" with Emily are falling for Avery... Seriously? Even stranger, the will sets out a series of odd requirements. One being that Avery must spend at least one year in Hawthorne house, the family manor, and that she must allow Tobias's disinherited family to live there with her. Talk about awkward. And maybe even dangerous.
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